Points for effort.
Well, I guess I'm a jerk with no sense of humor then. The voices were too painful to my ears, I'm not kidding or exagerating. Where did you take the audio from?
Well, I see what you're trying to do though. I really like the style and could see great flash coming from you. But you need to improve your audio (I've noticed this in some of your other flashes too). Check on the boards to get some voices actors with good microphones, or get a better mike yourself. You can also find some free tools on the internet to improve the sounds of audio clips.
I don't ever want to see anime people in their underwears ever again though.